Ripples Poem by david odiase

Ripples

Rating: 4.5


splat queer transport wave
vast sprinting widened spheres
twig humble journeyd distort gave
retreating hamlet lucid-clear

sponged infants banks had bath
steers faced life tempest wade
niches no further a night after birth
afterlings, feable brook departed fade

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
comparin life to a ripple. we're born with an impact(birth) and we journey tru life tryin to impact on world around us. then when we die, we leave that impact behind(death) to fade as ripples do.
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