Joanne Monte

Rings Of Passage - Poem by Joanne Monte

There is a wind
breaking with eloquence, rain,

a thousand origami cranes for longevity;
and two women, hibakusha, in a garden

of castle rock, stepping stones,
a pond of blue feathers, hiding their faces

behind the fluttering motifs of bamboo
and pine, their skin peeled like a soft plum

exposing the red pit of a muscle. There is a sense
that here in this city, there is a language

we cannot speak. It's the translation we fear most,
like a stone that first glowed,

thrown into the river, widening the rings
of passage, but still visible, still spreading.

The faces we did not see where the mouth
of the river choked on burnt flesh;

where the willow, clutching the dark,
stood weeping over the corpses of children.

Comments about Rings Of Passage by Joanne Monte

  • Freshman - 634 Points marvin brato (10/21/2013 3:49:00 AM)

    I like the imaginary narration of events...eloquently written! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 211 Points R.j. Wynn (5/1/2013 10:44:00 AM)

    Our past is, beautiful it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 18, 2012

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