(1957)

What do you think this poem is about?

Right Hemisphere

Folds of brain unravel
Under loneliness of inner thought -

A nakedness that has to hurt when
Cranium leaks out the poems thro'
Starboard hemispheric strain

The right-side strings it all together

See

Yet

Pains my consciousness to
Drill a deeper tunnel, finer channel
Help the inner me command
Control of my insanity

Thro' honed expression -
Mould it
Somehow
Let it brim unwittingly

Neuronal chatter
Spits out another poem

They call it being a poet
When left side is cast aside
For right side to bastardise
The logic

Leaving me betwixt a shadow-ghoul
And my façade:
The ego and the id presented.

Submitted: Friday, May 11, 2012
Edited: Friday, May 11, 2012


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  • Godfrey Morris (5/22/2012 2:35:00 PM)

    A lovely poem that reflects the mind of a great poet.

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  • Valerie Dohren (5/13/2012 11:58:00 AM)

    Hmmmm, I wonder what Freud might say about this one. God work. You may like to read mine entitled Anima and The Shadow based on the concepts of Carl Jung.

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