Ride The Rays And Come To Me..The Melody Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

Ride The Rays And Come To Me..The Melody

Rating: 3.9


The melody, you and me

say it again and let it rain
LOVE TO ME,

In the castle, above the sea,
waiting the blue..
waiting the white,
waiting the boat,

TO THE WIND SCREAMING
you to float,
to climb the castle
to kill ogre,

behind the gate, your soul mate
about to vanish to suffocate

where is the great? where is the key?

it is with the saint confess to me,

why to hesitate?

it is your fate being me,

on my tears stop to skate.

so much hunger, so much thirst,
for the taste,
why to waste our moments, ?
open the ways toward me
.................
Iam the chaste, for you the nights
I maintain, for you remain,

congested heart, , blocking the vein,

THE SOUL IN PAIN, reduce the strain
and live in me,

obtain the days, the sorrow contain,

ride the rays and come to me
the heart..you gain,

it is the fate, you are the soul
she is the mate,

she can't bear your princess,
you are the peer,
come to her with her share
all your fear

no one can
rate more than her,

break the chain, both flare,

her place above
flower, above tree,

soar with her,
she is the bee,

come on date,
why to wait?

where is the great?
find the key

very far throw, deep in oceans,
deep in sea,

THE MELODY you AND she

she is yours, you are hers,

TOGETHER YOU..
A MELODY

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dream Catcher 09 September 2009

The poem is like a dream...... the way you write is beautiful, unique.

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 09 September 2009

WOW TaMaRa! what a beautiful poem! so romantic! the flow of words makes it so so sweet!

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your passion for another is like fire :) good poem

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Obinna Eruchie 13 October 2009

Words passionate as flames of fire are expressed beautifully.

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Elsee Daniel 14 October 2009

beautifull love poem......well done 10+

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Akram Saqib 02 July 2017

nicely written poem expressing desire to meet the mate

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Souren Mondal 18 November 2015

A well written poem about love and expression of love.. Thanks for sharing..

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 10 June 2010

poetic indeed... deserving to be in the top 500... no flaws... no errors.. yup the best!

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Hadeer Ahmed 07 June 2010

very nice really :) keep it up... i like ur style

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Ken E Hall 08 December 2009

Just a corker of a poem...a cork holding in champange of words a melody of bubbles with love ++++10 regards

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