Rhythm Of Life! ! ! Poem by Shahzia Batool

Rhythm Of Life! ! !

Rating: 4.3


A mild smile is but a screen
vague and opaque
we find it hard to see through it
the mist of grief
though it persists in purer feel
and harder sense;
Life, in fact is a finer blend
of gloom and glee;
so this harmony in facts of life,
aspects of life
makes it quite liveable and lovable...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lasoaphia Quxazs 03 September 2012

When I was young I cried every second I found, but when somebody came by, I was ready to smile. That smile stuck on me, now I do not have to cry anymore, I can be kind and smiling all the time. It is a good feeling.

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Captain Cur 03 September 2012

A mild smile hiding the mist of grief. Very strong words in such a gentle insightful poem.

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Neela Nath Das 04 September 2012

Joy and woe are woven fine.If we can keep pace with this rhythm, happiness will be at our door.Loved it.

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R.k Das 04 September 2012

what can be said as a comment on this lovely poem, ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ? ? ? ? ? ? ? , i believe and strongly believe that poems like RHYTHM OF LIFE should be just read with a feather touch given by the readers' eyes, , ears, , and heart, , i am afraid many at times this one-liner comments tamper and tarnish the marvel and beauty of the' rhythm of life '.enjoyed this poem thoroughly, , shahzia is not only a wonderful literary critic but also a wonderful literary artist :) thanx

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Allemagne Roßmann 06 September 2012

Compact and impregnated with the elements called in life

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Muhammad Ali 30 January 2014

All true, you said in the poem. Aapi, considering our real cause of breathing, the joys and worries become different, and also what we call it Tension.

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Ravi Sathasivam 16 October 2012

Life, in fact is a finer blend of gloom and glee Nice wording. An excellent poem for encouragement and positive think. Tfs

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 15 October 2012

OK, life is 2 sided: up-down, happy-sad, in-out, until you find out who you are, after that just giving thanks, gratefulness, goodness to all, understanding all why they are for what they are. Wishing you the best.

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Vipins Puthooran 16 September 2012

Life, in fact is a finer blend of gloom and glee; Wow! ! ! ! I like this line..... 'tis my life....top marks! ! !

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Walterrean Salley 13 September 2012

Life is a composition, balancing the bitter with the sweet - all things considered. The balance is necessary. For example, it’s good to be able to smile during the bitter times; that’s what gets us through. A good poem for encouragement. : -)

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