Rhyming Love Poem by Valsa George
Rhyming Love
In the folds of night as a wave, you came
Charioted in a filmy dream
All night you were with me
And in love's uncharted land, we roamed
You sang to me sweet rhymes of love
Echoing the lore of romantic lovers
Your voice choked and moist with passion
Overwhelming me with an ecstasy so rare
You fondled me with infinite tenderness
Opening in me all inlets of pleasure
Our hearts with divine furore, filled
And we knew love's sweet benediction
In the seclusion of that silvery night
Looking into the corners of your love lit eyes
I saw an ocean of rising and receding tides
And took a dip in the whirl pool of love
All night I inhaled your scent
Knew the warmth of your breath
Sucked the sweetness of your lips
Alas! With dawn, you faded away like dew
Remarkable. Like a fine perfume, Love intoxicates the room. Ravishingly Romantic, Unforgettable! ...........
A lovely trance with deep love and romance with love's sweet benediction... very nice
A very romantic and sensous poem. You wrote this with such passion and wantoness. Very delightful poem.
Imagination, rhyming and romanticism all at their best.....Valsa......nicely scripted with nice and loving words...... great write as always
Sweet rhymes of love is really pleasant to listen and this poem is excellently penned. Looking into the corners, eyes with Divine vision capture tenderness for life. Ocean of hope rises like sun rises in East. Very beautiful poem this is and this reflects love beautifully....10
Beautiful, Romantic poem. This poem add sweetness to lips, though like a lovely dream, it may fade away like dew drops by the morning. I loved reading each lines. Beautifully presented.
Beautiful, passionate and wonderfully written. Your poetry always lifts me. Thank you so much.
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I would like to translate this poem
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Poems often have their mysterious elements wrapped in the devices that fit best to them. Here is a poem unraveling the mystery of 'rhyming love' that sans any element of hypocrisy or prejudice and its literary glow teems with amazing refreshness of the kind. Valsa madam, you have added another feather to your cap of fine poetry that has long been on your head.. Truly spendid! Here is my 10 marks for you.