Jinal Oswal

Rookie - 34 Points (26/05/1989)

*** Rewind *** - Poem by Jinal Oswal

Let's forget the present
And live the past again
Where you were my GOD
And I was your small Angel

Where there were very few words
Where only feelings were pictured
Where the morning sun brought a surprising day
Where no cloud was gray

The smile on your face made my day
How much I wanted those moments to stay
Nights were full of stars
Life never gave a single scar

Walking down the roads with hand in hand
Dreaming of a house and a farmland
A hug was all we needed
Until our expectations exceeded

Love is unkind
Is what I think when I rewind
Irrespective of the rights and wrongs
The life still goes on

Love is what I did and still do
And I see it only grew
I have captured it now in me
Never will I let it free


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Comments about *** Rewind *** by Jinal Oswal

  • Rookie - 83 Points Norman Hale (10/28/2012 10:47:00 PM)

    awesome eart felt writing i enjoyed this very much (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,470 Points Unwritten Soul (8/10/2012 11:37:00 AM)

    Rewind to good old days always bring back the smile, rewind to the pain past always hurt back but remind to be wise, so rewind and rewind you will know where you are now.....to be wiser or just having better smiles or all of them, nice write Jinal_SOul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 293 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (8/4/2012 4:40:00 AM)

    Wow! jinal..this is a masterpiece sister you just took me down the memory lane...I truly wish I can rewind the time too! great stuff my friend!
    Siya__! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ovi Hale (7/18/2012 6:30:00 AM)

    Just loved it. Reminds me of all the good memories i have of everything.
    Sometimes living in the past is ecstatic (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 6, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, July 6, 2012


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