Revive Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Revive

Rating: 5.0


Hello the sunset of my lonesome heart
Hello the sunrise of separation chart
Hello the lament of break up's hour
Goodbye the scent of nightly poems flower
Goodbye the story of friendship love
Goodbye the blue light of above
Goodbye the everlasting friend
Goodbye the beginning, goodbye the end
I'll ask the mirror of moon light
The tranquility of night
I'll ask the tomorrow dreams
The candle's gleams
To take care of you
If the springs of words aren’t beyond my ken
If the world doesn’t take my pen
I'll keep you in my heart to be alive
Goodbye the yellow leaves of my heart
Goodbye the shady side of my art
Hello the new fountain of eternity
Revive

(2008/9/21)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amanda Wixom 21 September 2008

I like it... you used a great combination of nature and poetry to make a fantastic poem thank you for telling me to read it

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<font color =fusha>Amy 21 September 2008

fantastic poem, i like your style of writing, keep going Remember Don't let anyone tell you they sky's your limit Ive seen footprints on the moon :)

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 21 September 2008

Mesmerising and reviving.Good work Persian.

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Thad Wilk 21 September 2008

A powerful write! Very well executed, a pleasure to read! Best wishes Shiraz! 10 Fried Thad

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C T Heart 21 September 2008

The hello's and goodbye's, beginning and end, the cycle of life and emotions...wonderfully written. a 10.

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Vilma Xelin 30 September 2008

nothing easy the feeling of good bye.... too sad to carry on, but so real and comun too....

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Nice piece: the poet's heart searches for the new fountain of eternity. Joseph Josephides - Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

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Nice praise based on God's love. The poem revives, it keeps us alive in the poet's heart and searches to find the new fountain of eternity. Bravo. Go ahead, my poet. Joseph Josephides - Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

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Patricia Bankhead 25 September 2008

Very Beautiful! I am so glad that God's love is everlasting. We never have to say goodbye :) Hugs~

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Macy Anne 24 September 2008

Hello.... Goodbye.... This poem...... is fine =] good work

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