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Aijaz Asif (12/21/2008 12:14:00 PM)
Ufffff what a marvellous write kesav, i wish one day i'll also write like the way you put the deep emotions in the pen, i'm thankful to you that you asked me to read this marvellously strong poem.....
'I look ahead ‘n shudder to think
To where my journey to where I’m led'…the whole poem is extremely beautiful but these lines are superb 100+++++
fav.
rgds
asif |
Rinzu Susan Rajan (12/16/2008 5:35:00 AM)
u tried to create a world of emotions with nature and its elements...
and that resulted in a beautiful piece with an enchanting imagery...
:) |
Thad Wilk (12/11/2008 1:58:00 AM)
Fabulous poem Kesav! ! Delightful start to finish! As this cloud fades away an you awaken you will remember this trip you have taken! My friend you will want to go back, to all this
and then repeat this journey - all over 'again'!
Best regards! *10*! !
Friend Thad |
Min Sia (12/10/2008 10:53:00 PM)
WOW! Like what you've said..it's gonna be added to my fav list!
Very deep..The imagery..feels like I'm in that dream..and the feelings it brought me..seeing what I've left..and then..seeing what I didn't see before..the virgin beauty..all were longing for..let me fall back to where I was once belong...
Very good philosophy!
This one is really great! |
Sarah Sisson (12/10/2008 8:41:00 PM)
I love that.....10++++ |
Andrew Blakemore (12/10/2008 4:14:00 PM)
A very beautiful poem Kesav, lovely flow to the verse. Best wishes, Andrew |
Deependra Kumar Jha (10/19/2008 7:50:00 AM)
I loved the composition. indeed nice! specially the lines:
...Ending my journey ending my dream
My mind awakens me; the cloud resigns… |
Ashraful Musaddeq (10/9/2008 6:17:00 AM)
Wonderful composition.
Love it. |
Al Ramos (9/12/2008 10:06:00 PM)
If only all my dreams could be so soft and silky. Mine are interrrupted by my better half snoring |
Sarvesh Kulkarni (9/12/2008 12:34:00 AM)
Extremely wonderful.I liked the first line immensely.Thank you. |
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