Resignation Poem by Barry Middleton

Resignation



On the edge of a cliff,
on the edge of a night,
a dark little cabin
is edged by my light.

So close to the edge
of destruction it stood
that I feared that my light
might do it no good
but tumble it headlong
with splintering wood
down rocks to the river
and end it for good.

And I wondered a man
should pick such a site
to lay his head down
for even a night.

But the storm at my back
convinced me to stay,
to die in the night
if death came my way.

Tuesday, March 22, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: acceptance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mike Smith 22 March 2016

And with the storm at your back it may even look cozy. Loved the second stanza. Great images and description, and good use of rhyme

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Dimitrios Galanis 22 March 2016

It sounds heroic but at same time sensitive and make you feel a sadness behind it.

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Dimitrios Galanis 23 March 2016

This is brave and heroic, that's what I mean, Barry.

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Barry Middleton 22 March 2016

Acceptance of fate.

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