Reminder For All … Poem by SALINI NAIR

Reminder For All …

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That time was vibrant itself
Plot was over in that stampede
Pact that match all force on earth
Review that steal all layers of its side
Fix the glimpses of warmth to her side
As the rays should pamper her love
A bliss that augment to heavens side

Marched terribly to extreme shores
Want to be vibrant in each step
Trial was on to conquer strange craft
Shot that parch all parts of the land
Reason of existence was its matter
Search of unexplored on fainted wings

Blindness was its marshal part
Disorder was in all new steps
Closed own eyes with greed of life
Blocked the opponents with new arms
Shrink to the self dishonest all time
As the emperor of universal chart

Wrinkled parts are pessimistic this time
Blindness search in the shadows of the past
Sink in the flow that endless this time
Ruin was complete for the lastly created
There the rays are optimistic as always
To burn the beauty with its lust eternal! ! ! ! !

©2015 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Tuesday, February 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A poem on ozone deterioration….
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 03 February 2015

As the rays should pamper her love A bliss that augment to heavens side A philosophic thoughtful poem..................10

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Khalid Saifullah 07 February 2015

Beautiful thoughts, beautiful poem................10

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Saheb Mohapatra 09 February 2015

yes the ozone layer is deteriorating day by day only because of man's sinful works............very thoughtful poem.............really touching and inspiring...............thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 February 2015

Beautiful envision on the basis of truth. Really reminder should be imposed. Thanks a lot..

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 15 February 2015

Beautifully written poem.I liked it Well done 10/10 Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 15 February 2015

Beautifully written poem.I liked it Well done 10/10 Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 15 February 2015

Great poem on nature with great concern for ozone depletion.....certainly serves a great reminder for all....... amazing composition......10

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Valsa George 15 February 2015

Ozone depletion has become a grave threat to mankind! How to face it is perhaps the greatest challenge before us! Thank you Salini for this great reminder!

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Valsa George 15 February 2015

Ozone depletion is one of the greatest threats which can make the lives of men on Earth miserable! How to face it is the greatest challenge before mankind!

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