Lucifera Santez

Rookie - 234 Points (4th feb / Belize)

Rememberinng Me - Poem by Lucifera Santez

Someday so far, far away,
You seem to remember me,
In all the mundane things you see,
It’s a sorrow, eclipsed by past,
It’s a pleasure that cannot last,
You remember all the pretty things,
Your memory tries to do me justice,
So many things you recall,
You remember
I wasn’t the reason for your fall,
But now it’s too late,
To fix our messy past,
I am long gone,
And there is nothing,
Just tears in your eyes,
Left for us……………..

Comments about Rememberinng Me by Lucifera Santez

  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (10/4/2013 4:22:00 PM)

    a good poem full of good times and bad. nice ink happiness and sad times (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 11,632 Points Hazel Durham (9/27/2013 5:58:00 AM)

    With beautiful rhythm and flow a sad and heart-rending poem! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,075 Points Noreen Carden (9/23/2013 5:14:00 AM)

    Hello Lucifera such a sweet lovely poem full of regret and sadness well done (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/16/2013 8:35:00 AM)

    Sweet and Sad, poured out from heart. Touching poem. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Robinson (9/16/2013 1:17:00 AM)

    You have burned the bridges to the past
    An old love turns autumn, then winter's blast
    Yet a turn and with a glance
    feel love's shaft through your heart by lance (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,196 Points Khairul Ahsan (9/15/2013 12:00:00 PM)

    So sweet, yet so sad! 10/10. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (9/15/2013 11:52:00 AM)

    So poignant and emotional. Very nice poem./ I invite you to visit my page too. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 15, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 16, 2013

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