Remember That When I Fondle Your Breasts Poem by Uriah Hamilton

Remember That When I Fondle Your Breasts

Rating: 4.5


There is nothing but mystery
Around every fleeting kiss
As we crawl on the beach
After prowling all night like cats,
I wish we were entwined on a city roof
Completely naked in the moonlight,
I’m not satisfied with anemic dreams
Or love making that utters quiet squeaks,
I’ve made offerings to Aphrodite,
Remember that when I fondle your breasts,
Our hearts are tangled in a sensual web,
There is water from soft lakes on your skin,
I’m going to dive into your soul and swim,
Let this relationship blossom into poetic myth,
Let future scholars interpret it,
Every lesson of illicit love will spring from our book.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lori Boulard 25 March 2006

I love this, Uriah! It has such fire and passion (naturally irresistible to women) , and a great ending as well. Nice!

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Simone Inez Harriman 25 March 2006

I love this one Uriah. Very passionate and irresistible as Lori has said.

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Theresa Rayman 25 March 2006

Uriah, This is wonderfully sensual and spicy. You have painted some tantalizing pictures with your words. Great imagery, great passion! Take Care- TGR (Theresa)

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Duncan Wyllie 25 March 2006

This is so sensual and passionate and so well written.Another gem from another brilliant poet.Keep um coming.love Duncan P.s I was listening to Hayley Westenra's Wuthering Heights when I was reading this and the two married beautifully together.

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Will Barber 15 May 2006

I loved this - intensity pervades your poems. Aphrodite always demands a sacrifice, and is a jealous goddess, scourging those who turn from her altar, not paying proper reverence. This poem conveys that perfectly, with insight and great beauty.

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Raynette Eitel 27 March 2006

I still love this poem, even after the changes you made, Uriah. It is sensual without being offensive...and the longing is palatable. I love the line, 'I'm going to dive into your soul and swim.' This does have mythological proportions and promise of grandeur. Raynette

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Hugh Cobb 25 March 2006

Uriah, This is wonderful. The sensuality and eroticism and the passion of romance fills it with intrigue and wonder. Your offering to Aphrodite was indeed rewarded with this most sensual and delectable poem. Warm regards, Hugh

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Mary Nagy 25 March 2006

I love the thought of diving into the soul and swimming around! This entire poem was wonderful Uriah. Sincerely, mary

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Esther Leclerc 25 March 2006

'I’ve made offerings to Aphrodite, ..' That's how you got this poem. It's fantastic.

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