Remedy Poem by Unwritten Soul
Remedy
Without ears that listen
I wont waste my words to speak
As if too much water on plants
Flood will kill them only
Because my care for you is expensive
As if it is water in desert
...but i always ready to offer
Like a well that always full
For you
I always believe that some time, we shouldnt give too much care,
afraid we get misunderstood, instead blamed for suffocation
because beauty will only be missed when its gone
never when it still around
so take care of how much things we giving, till enough of hands to handle
Soul
..but i always ready to offer Like a well that always full readiness to offer is heavenly. it is a greater character. givine is more precious than receiving. tony
A thought provoking write. Going through this poem I memorize a proverb 'Too much of any thing is good for nothing.' Too much of water spoils the plants like the flood does. Hence proper care should be taken. A drop of water is most important. Further much care sometimes creates fear that one can't enjoy beauty. Beauty will only be missed when its gone. We should take care of how much things we giving, till enough of hands to handle. Dear Soul, you have painted this poem astutely and hauntingly. I like most lines are... Because my care for you is expensive As if it is water in desert ...but i always ready to offer Like a well that always full Many thanks for posting this gem.
It is ubiquitous around us.... :) Thanks for reading and spend your time to comment :)
Beauty will be missed when its gone. Very well said. Too much of water can kill the plants. Care should be there only upto needed and not a drop beyond that. One of the facts maybe we learn later. This break us apart from inside. I loved each worthy lines that is part of our life. Thought provoking write.
Beautiful message conveyed through equally exquisite images.Thanks for sharing☺
It's a very fine image about care, theover-watering. Yes, I really like this poem. It has to go in my favourites
Oh, I am happy knowing you like it....dont eat too much too...when there is hunger food be more delicious hahahahaha joking! Thanks dear for visit
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 3:09:43 AM # 1.0.0.1119
water, pouring down to earth from the womb of clouds are as precious as words coming from a gifted heart
To form a geneous clouds, need a strength and patience And all natural occurences, they occur with reasons To the land it marks the prescence To hearts it ask for understand Thanks dear green rose :)