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When you think about our lives -
Screaming kids and nagging wives:
'Can't smoke here - no! not there -
Your bloody fags, they drive me spare!
A second bottle? drunken slob,
Off your arse and get a job!

You never take me for a spin -
A little cruise from all the din! '
'You're the bleedin' noise' I scream
Inside my head. I only dream
Of shouting out for fear of what you'd do -
If I could only ball 'F*ck you! '

No, the only way that I can manage
Bearing up against your visage, is
Watching films with hero Arnie -
While drowning in a greasy sarnie.

'Oh to be! ' I wish in sighs:

Arms like his would suit me well -
I'd bust the walls; escape this hell
In which I only just exist;
Getting through by staying pissed.

Agh! the bloody screams again!
And so I crack.
Hang on Arnie,
I'll be back…

Now where's the friggin' telly?
Go on Arnie, give it welly!
Thunder on; it's a-okay -
See how quiet she is today?


Copyright Mark R Slaughter 2009










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Submitted: Sunday, October 04, 2009
Edited: Thursday, April 05, 2012


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  • Echezonachukwu Nduka (6/9/2012 2:35:00 AM)

    You're doing a wonderful work Mark.I love the poem and the rhymes too! .I invite you to check my page and read some of my poems here.Thank you.

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  • Jayvin George (5/9/2012 9:38:00 PM)

    nice poem & just keep your head up my friend

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  • Aylin Lp (1/16/2012 7:51:00 AM)

    It's a nice poem about life, but i don't it's life that's bothering you, it's more like the person you're living with xD p.s. life can be quite good you just need to let it GET you: P

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  • Ruby Muniz (2/4/2010 3:32:00 AM)

    NICE Poem Mark! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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  • Lee Cheng (12/17/2009 5:55:00 AM)

    Life has different life

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  • Ro'ya Abdulaal (10/4/2009 6:56:00 AM)

    It's just amazing how you expressed about 'life' in a poetic way; your words flow smoothly and they carry a HUGE load so the title perfectly fits. Well done

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