Relationship Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Relationship



Offering: one MT love
Payment: one MT dream
Barter relationship

Offering: one hug and 10+
Payment: one kiss and 10+
Zero+ relationship

Offering: eight hours labor
Payment: one day survival
Exploitation relationship

Offering: lifelong service
Payment: pension benefit
Engineering relationship

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ejaz Khan 24 June 2009

Very interesting and humorous write! As a relationship must work satisfactorily, so I'll give a tenner with a smile.

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Priyanka Bhowmick 24 June 2009

an interesting, mind blowing, humor filled poem... lovely! !

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various relationships...some exploiting...some casual...some long lasting brought out well in this write

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Offering: lifelong service Payment: pension benefit Engineering relationship....... we do for growingthe relatiosnship. it is permanent bonding try and suceed also.... beautiful write...10 read mine butteflies around and sparatw ways...tks

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Marieta Maglas 24 June 2009

I appreciate the finesse of speech and the acuity of observations about the reality of the day.10+++

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Meggie Gultiano 26 June 2009

enjoyed reading this..truly i am LOL

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Karla Bardanza 26 June 2009

I just luv the irony! Thanks also for commenting my poems.That was very kind of you.

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 26 June 2009

Wellpenned the relation between complicated life and our deeds.

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Maria Barbara Korynt 26 June 2009

Interesting poem. Whether cheerful? For me rather not. These are sad observations, if it is real. It is written very well but it doesn't surprise me. Your poems are being read with pleasure, since it is always possible to find something what will interest us in. (10 v.) Greetings. :) Maria Barbara Korynt

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Rakesh Bedi 24 June 2009

Hard realities of life in a witty fashion, good sir!

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