{rejected By Love} Poem by Kieran J1996
{rejected By Love}
What have you done?
A smothering indistinctness of betrayal,
Memories darken and twist,
Becoming creatures of sin,
Once,
We lived in paradise,
Innocent and untainted,
But your love perished,
A vengeful fever of darkness,
Overcomes your once pure heart,
By a growing darkness,
Your heart was consumed,
And so,
Our love,
Was diminished,
And in a storm of sorrow,
It rejects us,
YOU,
Have condemned us,
To forever,
Never love,
Nor find love,
Or even to be loved,
We cannot even gaze,
Look upon love,
For it's glowing soul,
Will forever deny us,
This is what you have done,
Made us outcasts of love,
Hated by that which can,
Not even feel hatred,
We are,
Condemned
Undiluted feeling.........you splash that feeling to portray what lies beneath your brain... This what i called 'raining at the night', beautiful but deep, dark and inspired
The ones we love most, do often condemn us. And we feel, or don't feel, to the point where we wish we've never felt anything at all. Good job putting a lot of emotion into your writing.
That's an awesome poem. Full of passion and vigor. Perhaps love can often look down upon many but I fell it's a bit like yin and yang. Loneliness and company come and go all the time, and so does love. However I most like these lines, they're like a punchline at the end. Hated by that which can, Not even feel hatred,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 5:19:09 AM # 1.0.0.1119
this is AMAZING! ! its so well written and you have such a talent for this. its beautiful.