.regret (Haiku) Poem by C R Clark

.regret (Haiku)

Rating: 2.8


Ain’t camped once this year
Ain’t had a single campfire
Something’s wrong with that

© C R Clark 1/15/2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 17 January 2009

lovely haiku...lol...enjoyed this one...Fi

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Ivor Hogg 17 January 2009

I can empathise but age precludes my camping any more I must rely on memories

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Rachel Butler 13 October 2009

Ain’t camped once this year Rachel Ann Butler

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Anjali Sinha 30 January 2009

small and cute nice haiku ++10 anjali (read mine Eternally)

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Vaibhav Pandey 27 January 2009

excellent haiku. you are very good at writing them. 10

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Barry A. Lanier 27 January 2009

C.R. I've enjoyed perusing some of your wonderful work of 'Life in Motion' as we are from about the same period (Periods) in time....reading this reminded me of one of the very forst poems I wrote some 25 years ago, but I've carried it with me since...'My Little Fire'...check it out, of course it's from my vocabulary and age of development at the tie I wrote it....see ya BARRY

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 23 January 2009

Richard a thought provoking piece. I gues one just has to stop and smell the campfire smoke, right? I enjoyed, Loyd

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