Refined! ! ! ! ! Poem by Jinal Oswal

Refined! ! ! ! !



Let's get up and get going
Walking hand in hand
In search of those small things which our routine banned

The rattling water
Chirping birds
Walking bare feet on the green grass

Don't say anything
Let those eyes speak
Let the eye lashes express your feelings

Let's get crazy
Search for the dreams
In the night garden
Playing hide and seek with us

The whistling trees
The sweet perfumed flowers
The cold wind
Our souls, let them get refined! ! !



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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
How much I miss these simple things in life... Feeling the cold winds, walking bare feet on the grass, listening to the birds. Life is so fast we forget that our loved ones need our simple attention... Talking about the day, work is not all that we should give... Life makes us forget what were our childhood dreams.. I am sure somewhere even you might be wondering where did all these things go? Hope you like this simple though of mine. Thank you for reading. Take care :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siyabonga A Nxumalo 10 November 2012

Nice poem Jinal my friend, yes the daily routine we live by has banned all these simple but life pleasing things. Can't remember when was a last time I sat and watched the sinking sun, I used to love watching it. Once in 8 years I took my wife and kids and we took a slow drive in the evening and we went to a place where we could see it...I miss butterflies cos I seldom see them now, I'm always too busy to waste my time on unimportant things and that is the thought that alienate us from good and simple life.. Great poem dear. Siya_! !

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 10 October 2012

A refreshing nature poem! Very nicely written. Do coment on my newest too.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 10 October 2012

A refreshin nature poem so finely written. Enjoyd readin. Do cment on my newest too.

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