Red Face Poem by David Darbyshire

Red Face



Red bums
and sweet plums
Blue eye's
and long thighs

Blonde hair
skin so fair
Sweet lips
motherly hips

It's not fare
they all stare
I didn't want to be a gay man
it is just the way I am

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Gale 12 May 2006

No clue at first then...... well there it is in black and white. Patricia

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R H 11 May 2006

David, I liked the way you composed this - giving no hint in the first two stanza's about the narrator's true feelings. Just wondered if the second to last line could be shortened slightly - 'I didn't want to be gay it is just the way I am' Only my humble opinion...! Kind regards, Justine

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