Reciprocity Poem by Valsa George

Now, what more shall I give you Honey? ..... i hope your husband never finds out you sent this to ME! or, DID YOU MEAN: .....give you, Honey? in which case my answer would be Yes! Honey! ! i'd love some. and chocolate also................ Thanks valsa. :) bri - - - - - - - - or, as we in america might write the poem: Marital-Reciprocity, American-Style She punched me in the head, ...... that bad wife of mine, so, in return, i raked a scraper...... down her long spine. She countered with a big jab into my protruding rib cage, so i stomped on her right foot; i was filled with MUCH rage. Twenty-four hours later, she smiled at me; i didn't know why. So i smiled back at her and walked to her, with a BIG sigh. She wrapped her arms around me and hugged me real tight. Sooo i canceled the hitman. NOW it just didn't seem right. The next day on my way to work i was cut down by gunfire. A man with a gun spoke to me before i had time to expire. He said, Sorry, Bri, she found out about you hiring me first. So she hired me then, to satisfy her explosive blood thirst. (November 26, 2014) gotta submit this, Valsa! thanks for the inspiration! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! bri :)

v v nice and a superb romantic poem...wat else is reqd other than these soothing words to prove his worth in our life and the values and respect she has for him.............am planning to dedicate this poem to my better half too, obviously with ur name appended below as the Poet...Copyrights reserved: -)

I will strive to make your life ever sunny Now, what more shall I give you Honey? Simply beautiful and amazing.................10

A glowing tribute to the one you love is brought out in rhythmic beauty. One's selfless love brings abundant love in return. May you both be blessed always.

All along my path closely you followed. I diverted from aim but patiently you corrected. With f only I become confident. Wonderful realization is shining in this poem that many times touches the heart. Wonderful composition and beautiful poem. It is very truly said that with mutual support only we live with harmony. Excellent one.

A relation should always be friendly and reciprocating which helps each other to enjoy and improve upon. We live safe and feel good on reciprocity. A beautiful write, enjoyed.

Each time I drifted away from my aim Patiently you corrected, never putting me to blame... good lines...10 helping hand comes from friend and companion omake us champion

The more you love, the more I feel confident Had you neglected, I would have been diffident In every step you direct, making me efficient Your concern I find more than sufficient A beautiful poem which speaks of the effects of a beautiful relationship.Well written Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

What a beautiful tribute to the one you love! Love is sealed in the giving and this is day-long love making and the returns are obvious. Priceless intimacy of love! Great write, Valsa!

In mutual support, we live in harmony Our abiding bond, we place above money I will strive to make your life ever sunny Now, what more shall I give you Honey? - very nicely envisioned.- - - 10