Reason Poem by nima tshering

Reason

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What have I done in my past life?
Right now I am so sad
What have I done so bad?
That I am taking pain of it
What have I done wrong?
Right now I am being ignored

Have I been cruel to someone?
Right now I am being hated
Have I made anyone sad?
Right now I am so lonely
Have I separated any one from each other?
now I am being left behind

Friday, September 4, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: reason
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Phurpa Wangdi 04 September 2015

nice poem indeed..thnks for sharing

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Nima Tshering 28 September 2015

thank you my friend...

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 October 2018

Have I been cruel to someone? Right now I am being hated Have I made anyone sad? Right now I am so lonely....thinking of the previous life and finding the reason for today........sadness does not remain always..... be happy. make others happy. be with children. you will smile with them.. help the poor. you will naturally smile and forget your sadness.. a very fine poem you have written dear poetess. tony

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Nima Tshering 16 October 2018

Thank you for you wise advise...sometimes life gets rough and sometimes smooth just for us to realize what we are and what we want to become and I am glad i went through because whatever i am now is because of that...Experience and Become Wise

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 September 2015

is it really because of a past life. or if we begin to love without egoism all will love us. if we love we will receive love. this is sure and certain. a life before, a rebirth.. are they not myths. sorry for asking. it is simply my doubt. thank you. tony

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Nima Tshering 06 September 2015

thank you for the comments @Chinedu Dike....it sure is unpredictable where we are bewildered in mist....

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Chinedu Dike 04 September 2015

What life throws back to one is quite unpredictable. Sometimes we become victims of karma or fate. It's also worth noting that some people by virtue fall, while some others by sin rise. A well articulated piece of poetry bristling with insight. Thanks for sharing Nima. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Nima Tshering 06 September 2015

thank you for the comment Chinedu Dike.....it sure is unpredictable what life throws at us...i will be honored to read your's too

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Lyn Paul 04 September 2015

Many experiences we have to face in life gaining strength from all. Lovely words expressed.

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Nima Tshering 06 September 2015

thank you for the comment Lyn Paul...

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