hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 38,557 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Really Fool - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

“You are really fool” mother always retorted
When will you pick up and be successful
I used to upset with her remarks
It was hampering my good start

She was right in her assertion
Young people of my age were happy in succession
I was little slow in growth competition
I was failing in any attempt for repetition

Yes, I was failing in their eyes
But I was right in my tries
I did not want any short cut
I wanted no doors to be shut

The progress was my aim
But no other way I claimed
I wanted it to be shaped
But each time I was slapped

I should be reminded
And always offended
With satires and remarks
“Look here, failure starts with this man “


Comments about Really Fool by hasmukh amathalal

  • Rookie - 37 Points Colleen Courtney (5/9/2014 11:12:00 AM)

    A nicely written piece but so very sad to me. All should be built up not knocked down. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 38,557 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/9/2014 10:01:00 AM)

    it was ok


    Meko Gray7 minutes ago
    a little bit confusing and not solid enough (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,557 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/9/2014 9:48:00 AM)

    “You are really fool” mother always retorted
    When will you pick up and be successful (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 9, 2014



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