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REALITY IS ALWAYS ILLUSION UNREALIZED

Confessions of Krishna - 7

Why the morning birds are gloomy and silent
Why the sky is pale and dull
Why the trees are drooping its drowsy leaves
Why the river is dead without a tiny wave

Once all these birds enveloped the Vrindavan
With blankets woven with their magical songs
The sky was vibrant ever with mystic colors of fantasy
Filled with colorful dreams of love

The trees bloomed as if spring was always there
Full of bees and butterflies buzzing for nectar
The green grass was covered with fallen petals
Which made soft bed for us to fall and sleep

I thought every thing was same in my absence
But now I feel a vast difference
And without you I feel weary and dull
Without your love life is sad and still

When will you come and change all these
Crude realities of nothingness
Caused by the long span of your absence
And turn everything as blissful once it was.

Through your absence you taught me
The painfulness of separation
The 'Jagath' is always a 'Mithya'
When REALITY IS ALWAYS ILLUSION UNREALIZED


(This is an imaginary poem written as narrated by God Krishna to his childhood love Radha, to show how sublime and deep his love was.)

Vrindavan - The beautiful garden where Krishna and Radha spent their time.

Jagath - The world

Mithya - Unreal [ based on the principles in Vedas, everything in the world is 'Maya' - an illusion.]

Submitted: Friday, June 18, 2010
Edited: Monday, October 18, 2010


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  • * Sunprincess * (9/19/2012 12:29:00 AM)

    oh i wish to read the whole story...very intriguing..love this.. :)

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  • Aquarius Girl (7/19/2010 11:25:00 AM)

    beautiful work...reality is always illusion unrealized..does Krishna think like that because in the story the lovers get separated?

  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (7/5/2010 10:48:00 AM)

    ‘The 'Jagath' is always a 'Mithya'/When REALITY IS ALWAYS ILLUSION UNREALIZED’…Vedantic reflection…

    Everything is but manifestation of God and canopied by God [Lord Krishna] …fine cut poetry with polish and sparkle of diamond… Thanks for sharing…
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10

  • Catherine Yen (7/1/2010 3:43:00 AM)

    The poem brings out its passsion and exuberance with genuine identification of a full romance, the all-embracing of its inward intimacy forcing the compelling in its wonderful hue in poetry.

  • Sreekala Sukumaran (6/22/2010 9:54:00 AM)

    Lovely write we can feel their love through your poem... Flow of your words was really nice..Liked it so much....10+++

  • Pranab K Chakraborty (6/20/2010 9:12:00 AM)

    Lucid but philosophically enriched writing. Radha.....who is engaged in aradhana. Well-written.

    Regards,
    pranab

  • Marieta Maglas (6/18/2010 2:29:00 PM)

    Spare, elegant lines more than deserving of tens.Thank you for sharing.

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