Real Life Journey Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Real Life Journey

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He forced me to reconsider
My association lacked thunder
As it was some days before
I was certainly sad and sore

What did it to me?
Forced to rethink and feel free
As he was certainly forcing his views
Which were totally unwarranted and due

I was reasonably upset
He had opened up very late
Were his thoughts unrealistic?
It was causing hurt to basic instinct

How can love be called lust?
He was loosing my trust
Now we were like shore apart
Part of same river but not real part

“No dear, I can’t take you anymore”
You are not desired therefore
You can have another partner
I can’t be the one with you anymore

He took my displeasure seriously
As there was no use to remain continuously
In touch or in real life journey
I thanked gracefully the powerful almighty

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 November 2013

Adam Hoffman21 hours ago Too much filler

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 November 2013

Brundaban Panda21 hours ago Real. Comment +1 Ok

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 November 2013

love of life Guilty Pleasure21 hours ago touching and filled with sorrow Comment +1 A partner with true love is a need for life journey.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 November 2013

He forced me to reconsider My association lacked thunder

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 November 2013

???? ???? NE.. I was reasonably upset He had opened up very late Were his thoughts unrealistic? It was causing hurt to basic instinct

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 November 2013

good poem and nice one noel elnol nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 November 2013

G*y*u*l*c*e.. very good, thnks

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