Re-Evaluate... Poem by Annette Aitken

Effective poem, Annette. Limbo is not a nice place to be. You might enjoy my poem About Change. Laurie

A compelling writing, Annette. I always enjoy how effectively you share your inner conversations with the reading audience. We feel as if we are not just observing, but part of the process. The reader, too, is drawn into this sense of discomfort of a transitional place, the space of limbo, the space where we cannot dwell but the next step is often not obvious. We feel the tension. We feel compelled to choose, to act, to urge you on.... Nicely done! :) S

Dare to love, dare to live. The fear of letting go this place of limbo for indecision can be a place never to linger, - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I love the easy rhymes that flow from line to line and carry your message so naturally- -this is not a skill to be sniffed at, I cannot do end rhymes without pouring concrete all over the lines so I revere those who can do this! I love this poem and its message! In fact, I ten it! ! !

I agree with all four of the previous comments. A very thought-provoking poem indeed.

It's good to re-assess your life now and again. I have found friends, people I've not yet met, have helped me these last few months to look at the future more positively. I hope you will find the same. It's a very thoughtful poem.

Great poem, being in limbo is no way to survive.