Raven Poem by Fadwa Daddou Gmiden

Raven

Rating: 3.3


If you see a dark place
Know that a raven passed by
If you see a weeping eye
Know that a raven passed by

All what it left inside
It's pain and hurts
It closed the doors
leaving you behind

I can hear the screams at night
I can see the bleeding hearts

If you see a dark place
Know that a raven passed by
If you see a weeping eye
Know that a raven passed by

Nothing but ashes were found
Nothing but dried blood on the rocks
Nothing but the broken look in the eyes
Nothing but the fugitive love

I can see the crawling
I can hear the whoop of the crow
The sun has gone
The night falls

If you see a dark place
Know that a raven passed by
If you see a weeping eye
Know that a raven passed by

And through the doors of time
You shall escape
Through the light of hope
You shall escape

I drowned inside this place
But you shall run from here

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alafe Ramat 24 June 2012

Beautifuly expresd and wel brushed, a sad poignant write, wel done: -)

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Kellsey Hartmann 25 May 2012

this is very dark, though very descriptive. it's sad, but it paints a picture and there is a glimmer of hope at the end.

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Saadat Tahir 24 May 2012

a nice foot stepping into poe's shoes it is scary for sure...nice effect be happy sat

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