Ravage Poem by Lucifera Santez

Ravage

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Leave me a scar,
a tear, a frown,
leave me the sorrows of your heart,
all your sadness,
give it all to me.
Kiss me with your bloodied lips
and give me all your broken dreams,
Will you take my smiles?
My strength, my love?
Will you drink from my lips
the essence of your redemption?
We are two broken halves,
forged together and then forced apart,
we are the night and the day,
an end to a beautiful start…

Monday, November 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 14 June 2018

The best part of the poem are the concluding four lines: 'We are two broken halves, forged together and then forced apart, we are the night and the day, an end to a beautiful start…' - truly magnificent!

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Bri Edwards 15 November 2016

it sounds like you is getting the better deal! ! ! me is getting the short end of the stick! : ( i shy away from love poems, but i'm sure this would excite the hearts and minds of many. and i DO like this EVEN THOUGH IT IS A LOVE POEM! to MyPoemList. thanks. bri :)

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