~~rating~~ Poem by (De Va)

~~rating~~

Rating: 3.1


There is someone out there wanting to be malicious in rating poems.
To you...This poem is written..



If you have nothing better to do,
Than rate my poetry with a two,
Because you see I am better than you,
Do my words really have a hue?
That make you want to destroy me too?
So this I say to you in lieu.


Then there is something I suggest
Please just go and take a rest.
If you find you cannot compete
Do not try to come to me to defeat,
For my poetry speaks on its own
And needs not ratings to be shown.

My talent stands out for all to see,
And your ratings cannot hurt me.
Your meanness is only your own catastrophe
But, one day you will bend down on your knee
And know that what you did was meant to be
So I could write a poem just for thee.

So in the end I laugh with mirth
At all you thought you could birth
By your malicious deeds of envy
As you attack in your frenzy.
But I have survived your second attack
And always will, you can count on that.


~~~Your Soul is Purple Today~~~~
To the one who wants to hurt by low ratings
You think you can hide,
but your soul is not invisible
I can see you, and I can feel you,
So if you need to talk, I am here,
If you simply want to be mean,
Then I am still here...hugs to you...
I offer my soul to lay your head in
I offer my soul to wrap your heart.
I offer my soul to help you be healed
I offer my soul, Please take comfort there.....
Hugs....DeVa

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ace Of Black Hearts 23 January 2012

I've ran into a person like that too. Only I think they just didn't like the poem subject material. They found it offensive, and felt it was about them. When it was just story made up, and pretend. With truth lying in between. Verses with a hook so it seems. It could be true but it most certainly doesn't mean its about you. I hate to say but I don't even know you. So if it fits right in with your life that's not my fault. Illusions of mockery. Sabotage will not effect me. No matter the rejection. Show that hatred as affection. Go ahead. It's really not needed to be relived. It won't stop my writing. I do it for me. Not for you.

0 0 Reply
Dave Walker 23 January 2012

Your talent truly is there for all to see. You are one of the best poets on this site, I am sure most will agree.

0 0 Reply
(De Va) 24 January 2012

Thanks to you Dave and Ace...smiles n grins....whoever wanted to bring the ratings down rated most of my poems several times to bring the overall rating of each poem down to between a 4 and 6...so...I erased all ratings on the poems....It was the second such malicious attack on my ratings...to not like a poem is understandable, and everyone has a right to rate as they feel is deserved, but to rate the same poems several times with a 1, simply to bring the rating down is sad...but..the ratings cannot hurt my poetry simply because the words speak for themselves....I write with passion from my very soul....Blessings...and to the one who did this...I am sending blessings to you....hugs..

0 0 Reply
(De Va) 09 February 2012

I do so love humor....grins

0 0 Reply
Charles Darkly 28 January 2012

Anonymous low rating poems is the ultimate in passive aggression. I liked this one and didn't give it a 1.: D

0 0 Reply
Pheko Motaung 27 January 2012

Where there is smoke there is fire.Where there is fire there are people.Where there are people there is trouble And you're a fantastic poet.I love your poems.God protect you and let your great talent go from strength to strength despite maliciousness of the uncomprehending.

0 0 Reply
Silentpoet Grl 26 January 2012

De Va, your work is inspiring, truly wonderful and your spirit is even more amazing.

0 0 Reply
Laron Green Sr. 25 January 2012

LOVE THIS JUST EVERYTHING ABOUT YOUR WORDS I FEEL THEM

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
1 / 48
(De Va)

(De Va)

The Cosmos
Close
Error Success