Rant Is Permitted Poem by Savita Tyagi

Rant Is Permitted

Rating: 5.0


This life is as true as words spoken
Once released becomes a lie spoken

Once relationships were like a rock
A firm support for climbers
Now it feels like a swamp
Still one must wade through

Old love wears out
New ones aren't sturdy

Keep your legs strong
To carry you through
Others' shoulder are strong enough
Just to carry your dead body
In life on a wheel society
Shoulders are just a cliche

learn to spend some time by yourself
However hard it may be
One can be alone even in a crowd
Yet have great company in a shadow loud

If you can pay for services
Social structure is there for you
Hospital, nurses, doctors, psychiatrist
Food, electricity, water and home
It is pay as you go society
No place like home is also a cliche

Love! What about love?
look at chameleon
Love resembles some thing like that
It is always there if you can spot it
If you can't don't worry
life has many riddles to solve
love is just one of it
Move on............

One more thing
Don't think twice about
What you just read!

Enjoy your summer and your wandering
Summer's delight falls alike
On sylvan and city life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 10 September 2016

i spied the title, so i thought: i am permitted here. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i like cliches! ! ! cli·ché klēˈSHā/ noun noun: cliché; plural noun: clichés; noun: cliche; plural noun: cliches 1. a phrase or opinion that is overused and betrays a lack of original thought. the old cliché “one man's meat is another man's poison.” synonyms: platitude, hackneyed phrase, commonplace, banality, old saying, maxim, truism, stock phrase, trite phrase; old chestnut a good speechwriter will steer clear of clichés a very predictable or unoriginal thing or person. each building is a mishmash of tired clichés 2. want to know? look it up. ha ha! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i liked the stanza before this one, but THIS ONES TOPS THEM ALL so far. did i use a cliche? i hope so. One more thing Don't think twice about What you just read! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Savita, i was just thinking i should get off this computer, out of this chair, go outside, and wander down the roadways and into the country a bit. you've talked me into it by these words: Enjoy your summer and your wandering thanks, bri :)

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Savita Tyagi 10 September 2016

Thanks Bri for your comment.

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