Ransacked Poem by Zero empty

Ransacked

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Sense of confusion filled with
desperation in agony
heart gets ransacked
of red non Newtonian blood
black viscous fluid of pain
and agony flow as void
cavities accumulate
in swollen heart

blood tears flow out
Cranial fluid leaks
external pressure bombards the skull
cascade of black veils before the eyes
worries of unknown haunt
the trembling mind
body goes Topsy turvy

I look towards an unreachable friend
all paths that i know reach a dead end
I want to disperse among the stars
yet black clouds block my path

I tremble in despair
in this prison
as I lay in wait
for a friend to comfort
me from the loss of another
and the feelings in my heart
RANSACKED

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 08 September 2013

a good write with a good flow loved it

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