Random Thought (On Autumn) Poem by Savita Tyagi

Random Thought (On Autumn)

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Grey sky
Howling winds
Swirling leaves
Cinnamon laden waft
From far off bakery
And a sedated mind
Is all that I own.

Of course it is Autumn!

Saturday, December 6, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 06 December 2014

A beautiful description of autumn of mind, very well penned.

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Daniel Brick 07 December 2014

I love autumn so I love this poem. i enjoyed those winds curling over and around me. and the smell of the spice was wonderful. I got either neutral or positive images of autumn in no.0, nothing negative. Is that how you meant it to be?

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Bri Edwards 20 February 2018

waft [as a noun: 1. a gentle movement of air. a scent or odor carried on a movement of air. .................i'd rather own the pastry! ! ! From far of bakery...................did you mean to type: From far off bakery? ha ha. bri ;)

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Geetha Jayakumar 06 January 2015

A Fantastic poem on Autumn. Loved reading each lines.

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Valsa George 15 December 2014

Winter is characterised by grey sky, swirling leaves and chilly blasts that is aromated with the smell of spicy stuff baked! In this season prior to winter, you keep a sedate disposition, neither joyful nor sorrowful! You are at peace with yourself! Sweet poem!

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Md Asadullah 14 December 2014

You don't know what treasure you own, treasure which many wealthy don't have, thanks for the share :)

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 09 December 2014

Is all that I own makes this poem wonderful really. Swirling leaves makes this poem alive. Beautiful one.

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