Random Thought 32 Identity Poem by Savita Tyagi

Random Thought 32 Identity

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I am known to some
Who do not know me
Some claim to know me
Yet do not know me.

Mysterious is the connection
Yours and mine
Like roots of trees intertwined
beneath the ground
Claimed by each tree above
As its own.

Roots understand it all!

Whatever I call mine
Isn't really mine
What I do not think as mine
Embraces me with such love.
Who thou are that walk by me?

Thursday, July 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: reflections,unity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 15 October 2019

Whatever I call mine Isn't really mine What I do not think as mine Embraces me with such love..... contradictions of life..... experiences written so well. tony

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Daniel Brick 08 July 2016

This is a brilliant poem. The issue of IDENTITY at its center keeps opening up but you never resolve it. How could you? Instead you keep adding layers of meaning which make us familiar with the mystery of identity. I love the metaphor of the tree and its roots, you are exposing the pretentions of those who wrongly think they can know what you don't know, that is, what Hamlet called the HEART OF MY MYSTERY. And I love that isolated line: ROOTS UNDERSTAND IT ALL. It baffles me and that's a good thing because it keeps me focused on the issue rather than settling for a superficial answer. This is pure poetry! It is evocative and inspiring. You don't shut the door on the Identity theme by giving us definitions, you open the door wide to our imaginations and say: YOUR TURN NOW! !

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