Random Love Poem #1 Poem by Tara Crown

Random Love Poem #1

Rating: 4.7


for beauty
lay by me
and see my light

with love
touch my shadows
and carry the sky

within you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Preeti - is here! 12 July 2006

Wow....a fine poem!

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Chuck Audette 06 March 2006

This is simple but beautiful, Tara. Lovely. -chuck

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Gina Onyemaechi 06 March 2006

'Touch my shadows' and 'carry the sky': that's just what this poem has done to me, Tara. Diamond writing. Gina.

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Declan McHenry 05 March 2006

A nugget. A gem. Grand.

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Scarlett Treat 05 March 2006

Love shared that reaches into the deepest darkest shadowy part of ourselves and takes us to the stars! How beautifully put in so few words. Well done, Tara

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