Raise The Bar Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Raise The Bar

Rating: 4.8


Raise the bar, raise the bar
Said this beating hearts scar
Rise it as high as shining star
That no one had touched so far
By singing the songs of tar guitar

Sing them loud, sing them loud
To clear the mounted dark cloud
So my scarred heart will feel proud
Along with the claps of this crowd
That makes the dying beat aloud

Sing it again and again and again
Until it stops this pouring rain
So this heart will forget all its pain
By breaking the links of pasts chain
That life had stained on it to train

Let the song play and play and play
To help others to smile on day
And nights to beam like a ray
So they will overcome their slay
With sign of smiles filled on way

So raise the bar, raise the bar
Sing them loud, sing them loud
Sing it again and again and again
Let the song play and play and play
Until then this grave of mine is gray

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shashendra Amalshan 20 August 2009

'Let the song play and play and play Until then this grave of mine is gray' This again is good, written in your usual free-flowing style, and yes sir! ! ! lets sing.. it will def turn our Grey lives in to colorful ones.. good one.. cheers shan

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Marieta Maglas 20 August 2009

nice simile: ''Rise it as high as shining star That no one had touched so far'' wonderful poem, lovely rhymes............10+++

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Joseph Poewhit 20 August 2009

Like climbing out of a pit

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Janell Cressman 20 August 2009

for me this poem was like starting at the darkest lowest point of my heart and finding the stairway and climing up to the highest and happyest place and staying there, an amazing brilliant and fabulas poem! ! ! ! ! 10! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Catrina Heart 21 August 2009

such a melodious composition with much beauty on the theme........Thanks! ! ! 10

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rago rago 20 August 2009

raise the bar raise the bar.........and you have raised poem hunter in zest....

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Ted M 20 August 2009

It's nice to sing away our pain, and raise the bar for a fresh tommorrow. Excellent write.............10

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Surya . 20 August 2009

beautiful poem with meaningful lines.this para says it all 'So raise the bar, raise the bar Sing them loud, sing them loud Sing it again and again and again Let the song play and play and play Until then this grave of mine is gray ' thanx for sharing voted 10 surya

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Louis Rams 20 August 2009

this will raise the heart of all who read for on this they can feed. very well done! a ten my friend

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