Marie Shine

Rookie - 390 Points (April 27th,1950 / Listowel. Co. Kerry)

Rainbow Of Love. - Poem by Marie Shine

Eternal love flows from my heart
like a vast restless ocean
Crashing in powerful waves
on the sandy shore of your heart
Where it flows in an all consuming
cascading waterfall
to bathe your soul in the rainbow
of my love...


Comments about Rainbow Of Love. by Marie Shine

  • Gold Star - 12,979 Points Rajnish Manga (2/7/2015 8:34:00 AM)

    The flow of emotions from one heart to the other and changing the complexion of the landscape- restless ocean of love meeting the sandy shores of the lover's heart and then it all transforms into a cascading waterfall with a rainbow in the background. So lovely and enchanting. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (2/5/2015 8:40:00 AM)

    Enjoyment of spectrum lovely write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (2/5/2015 8:40:00 AM)

    Enjoyment of spectrum lovely write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,908 Points Kim Barney (2/5/2015 5:45:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem. Much expressed in very few words. Enjoyed it immensely. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,734 Points Geetha Jayakumar (2/5/2015 5:19:00 AM)

    A Fantastic poem Marie. Beautiful flow of eternal love from soul.
    Congratulations, this poem being chosen as poem of the day. Beautiful presentation in few lines. Loved reading it.
    Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,181 Points Valsa George (2/5/2015 3:49:00 AM)

    Congratulations Marie on this poem being chosen as poem of the day! Loved this one! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,829 Points Heather Wilkins (8/30/2014 5:36:00 PM)

    a beautiful write Marie. cascading waterfall to bathe your soul in the waterfall of my love lovely thought (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,181 Points Valsa George (5/12/2014 1:49:00 AM)

    Love like a cascading waterfall....! . What an expression and what mighty force that flow of love has...! Anyone will be swept off his feet by its torrential force.... and the soul when bathed in the rainbow of love..will reflect it on the world which will appear in a riot of colours and the souls in love will radiate that love to other kindred souls, binding the whole world with a tight band of love! Small but forceful like a cataract! ! (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 8,236 Points Khairul Ahsan (5/24/2014 1:05:00 AM)

    Very nice comments, Valsa!

  • Gold Star - 9,886 Points Daniel Brick (4/19/2014 8:31:00 PM)

    I'm listening to this poem. The sound of the waves drowns out all other sounds - that's the full realization of.
    love, there's no turning back. Then the waves wash onto the shore, they are almost quiet but very insistent -
    that's the growing confidence in love's reality. Suddenly dizzying heights, over the edge, the cascade of water -
    the peak experience. Then, silence... and the rainbow spreads its colors in silence. (Usually, I interpret metaphorical language, but for this poem I decided to let my senses experience the poem directly.) (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 8,236 Points Khairul Ahsan (5/24/2014 1:06:00 AM)

    (Usually, I interpret metaphorical language, but for this poem I decided to let my senses experience the poem directly.) - So nicely said!

  • Gold Star - 8,236 Points Khairul Ahsan (12/24/2013 12:35:00 AM)

    It's a wonderful poem of love. The title and the text are so beautiful!
    All possessing, all consuming, all crashing love, aha!
    The 'Rainbow Of Love' is such a beautiful expression... as if it is an 'all enveloping' rainbow! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,975 Points Hazel Durham (11/24/2013 2:52:00 PM)

    Truly beautiful with a cascade of flowing heartfelt words sparkling with inner love and desire! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,064 Points Kanav Justa (11/22/2013 3:29:00 AM)

    ... truly a beautiful write once again... each line was so powerful...
    The first 4 lines of the poem were mindblowing... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,742 Points Wahab Abdul (10/24/2013 9:38:00 AM)

    wow! fantastic poem, i enjoyed every bit of it...thanks for sharing..10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 33,912 Points Gajanan Mishra (10/24/2013 9:31:00 AM)

    my love, eternal love, I like it, thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 24, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, October 25, 2013


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