Marie Shine

Rookie - 376 Points (April 27th,1950 / Listowel. Co. Kerry)

Rainbow Of Love.


Eternal love flows from my heart
like a vast restless ocean
Crashing in powerful waves
on the sandy shore of your heart
Where it flows in an all consuming
cascading waterfall
to bathe your soul in the rainbow
of my love...

Submitted: Thursday, October 24, 2013
Edited: Friday, October 25, 2013

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  • Silver Star - 8,757 Points Rajnish Manga (2/7/2015 8:34:00 AM)

    The flow of emotions from one heart to the other and changing the complexion of the landscape- restless ocean of love meeting the sandy shores of the lover's heart and then it all transforms into a cascading waterfall with a rainbow in the background. So lovely and enchanting. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,500 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (2/5/2015 8:40:00 AM)

    Enjoyment of spectrum lovely write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,500 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (2/5/2015 8:40:00 AM)

    Enjoyment of spectrum lovely write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,257 Points Kim Barney (2/5/2015 5:45:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem. Much expressed in very few words. Enjoyed it immensely. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (2/5/2015 5:19:00 AM)

    A Fantastic poem Marie. Beautiful flow of eternal love from soul.
    Congratulations, this poem being chosen as poem of the day. Beautiful presentation in few lines. Loved reading it.
    Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,104 Points Valsa George (2/5/2015 3:49:00 AM)

    Congratulations Marie on this poem being chosen as poem of the day! Loved this one! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (8/30/2014 5:36:00 PM)

    a beautiful write Marie. cascading waterfall to bathe your soul in the waterfall of my love lovely thought (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,104 Points Valsa George (5/12/2014 1:49:00 AM)

    Love like a cascading waterfall....! . What an expression and what mighty force that flow of love has...! Anyone will be swept off his feet by its torrential force.... and the soul when bathed in the rainbow of love..will reflect it on the world which will appear in a riot of colours and the souls in love will radiate that love to other kindred souls, binding the whole world with a tight band of love! Small but forceful like a cataract! ! (Report) Reply

    Bronze Star - 6,094 Points Khairul Ahsan (5/24/2014 1:05:00 AM)

    Very nice comments, Valsa!

  • Silver Star - 7,915 Points Daniel Brick (4/19/2014 8:31:00 PM)

    I'm listening to this poem. The sound of the waves drowns out all other sounds - that's the full realization of.
    love, there's no turning back. Then the waves wash onto the shore, they are almost quiet but very insistent -
    that's the growing confidence in love's reality. Suddenly dizzying heights, over the edge, the cascade of water -
    the peak experience. Then, silence... and the rainbow spreads its colors in silence. (Usually, I interpret metaphorical language, but for this poem I decided to let my senses experience the poem directly.) (Report) Reply

    Bronze Star - 6,094 Points Khairul Ahsan (5/24/2014 1:06:00 AM)

    (Usually, I interpret metaphorical language, but for this poem I decided to let my senses experience the poem directly.) - So nicely said!

  • Bronze Star - 6,094 Points Khairul Ahsan (12/24/2013 12:35:00 AM)

    It's a wonderful poem of love. The title and the text are so beautiful!
    All possessing, all consuming, all crashing love, aha!
    The 'Rainbow Of Love' is such a beautiful expression... as if it is an 'all enveloping' rainbow! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,042 Points Hazel Durham (11/24/2013 2:52:00 PM)

    Truly beautiful with a cascade of flowing heartfelt words sparkling with inner love and desire! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,059 Points Kanav Justa (11/22/2013 3:29:00 AM)

    ... truly a beautiful write once again... each line was so powerful...
    The first 4 lines of the poem were mindblowing... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,665 Points Wahab Abdul (10/24/2013 9:38:00 AM)

    wow! fantastic poem, i enjoyed every bit of it...thanks for sharing..10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,070 Points Gajanan Mishra (10/24/2013 9:31:00 AM)

    my love, eternal love, I like it, thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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