Rainbow Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Rainbow

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After seeing the colorful arch
I ran for my torch,
I wanted to know
where is the arrow!
Is it travelling to infinity?
No, it's least interested in divinity,
I found it in my heart,
reflected to her eyes through my art
with a bouquet of red roses
to gain love after so many losses.

Rainbow
Monday, June 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: rainbow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 19 June 2017

An instant comment on Valsa Gerge's poem Rainbow.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 June 2017

Philosophical write on rainbow. Fantastic expression. Enjoyed with attractive photograph provided. Many thanks dear Jawadji....10

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Loke Kok Yee 25 June 2017

Your words are all you need Melt rocks and make hearts bleed Your poem so sublime For sure love bells will chime Thank you sir.

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Akhtar Sahab, a fantastic rainbow and a reflection of the rainbow in your heart with colours of the rainbow, a bouquet of red roses and loads of love! Even Cupid would look down with defeat! ! ! Wonderful array of thoughts! :) 100

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Valsa George 20 June 2017

Akhtar ji..why look for Cupid's arrow When love is in your heart and marrow I see you soaring like a sparrow Singing aloud love's soprano

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Nosheen Irfan 20 June 2017

Beautifully written. A short but powerful write.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 June 2017

Gaining love with bouquet of lovable roses is interesting with vision of colourful rays. Even after some losses life blossoms seeing this colourful arch. Mind blows with to see rainbow and feel life. Love is really gained reading such an excellent poem shared here...10

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