Rainbow Poem by Rubel das raj
Rainbow
I know you
as a bird of morning
a river in forest
best song at party,
Glass of wine you
Queen of beauty.
when you smile to see me
its nest on all the tree,
one spoon water in desert
life gets easily brave-heart.
I know you
as a diamond eye of Terri,
ocean dream comes in mind
all problem are Kerry.
when you touch my hand
fire starts burning Glasgow,
ice fish is oil fried
all road are rainbow.
honey all road are
Rainbow,
loving rainbow.
rosy rainbow
sun bath rainbow
leaning Rainbow
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4/19/2024 6:37:41 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Rubel, I like your imagery and idea, but the poem is hard to follow, you need more cohesion, it doesn't all make sense. Your first stanza makes sense and I understand it. The rest of it is confusing, I try to take it a few words at a time, but some thoughts seem disconnected. I know you as a diamond eye of Terri, ocean dream comes in mind all problem are Kerry. What does this mean? Maybe a rewrite, I think it could be a great poem with a little work. Thank you for sharing, I look forward to reading this one again. When you are through let me know okay. RoseAnn