Rainbow Poem by sekharan pookkat

Rainbow

Rating: 5.0


Rainbow in the sky
Reminds your picture
Which a painter can never paint your body
Without the language of love.

The clouds in the sky
Reminds your body
Which a painter can never paint your body
Without the language of your dreams

The lightning in the cloudy sky
Reminds your complexion
Which a painter can never paint your body
without the language of thoughts

A sower can never plough the ground
Because there are seeds in the ground
Which give birth of a new life
With all your wishes painted in drachma

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetheart Morgan 12 June 2013

I just love the Greek mythology. I think it comes from ancient Greece all the aesthetics and beauty of the world. This poem is dedicated to a goddess, Iris. Then she will give, through its premonitory mists your reward. Very Beautiful.

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Soumita Sarkar 13 June 2013

Yes....the lines repeated makes it condensed and deep.Good...

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Farah Ilyas 13 June 2013

wao i enjoyed it lot while reading...beautiful use of metaphors & imagery here...kudos

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Payal Parande 14 June 2013

Be thou the rainbow in the storms of life. The evening beam that smiles the clouds away, and tints tomorrow with prophetic ray. Lord Byron just beautiful sir...bravo you can't see me but i am giving you a standing ovation

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Heather Wilkins 01 August 2013

a lovely poem about planting and reaping. nice writing

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Valsa George 21 July 2013

So many lovely images! Enjoyed the poem!

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 July 2013

Fantastic poem...Well read.

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Godfrey Morris 22 June 2013

Great poem with lovely thoughtful expressions.

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Ambrosia A 17 June 2013

Lovely poem. When some one is in love rainbow looks more colorful, clouds shower happiness and lightening brighten up ur day........keep loving, keep going. N'joy

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