! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***rain Reels Through***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar
! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***rain Reels Through***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Flecks of joy flick through bounty of beauty
blessing slips over grin sparking over stone
as moonlit flits across the darkness of door
soul awakes by eternity in ages and eons
yet not divine but from a true heart unknown
graces of beauty yet trudges through barriers
verdant green and blue dusts all when similar
as sizzles of rain reels through the dusty summer
love moves faster all across sky azure in unison
all dimensions by distances slowly blur in blue
space seems to mingle by melting shadow of dream
tranquility finds truth of reason yet unobtrusive
mirror never fails to find its image even being virtual
depth of silence slowly precipitates over rune of shadow
yet know time and space even differs by creed of variety
knowingly unknown riffles resolute from crowd within
Captions captivated Captions count Captions talk Captions reel Rain of captions Quenching the thirst of this very poem. Yet there was so much to digest So much to re-read Good one. Enjoyed the style very much.
another read for this wonderful sweet poem 10++++++
''space seems to mingle by melting shadow of dream'' super! ! ! +10 niculina
From : Harold K Schreiberg (London/ Orleans United Kingdom; Male; 47) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 1/10/2010 4: 18: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Good morning, dear poet friend, Thank you for your kind wishes I am sorry I haven't been able to answer more quickly but the PoemHunter site would not open! Your poems are full of striking images & rhythm, an excellent job !
mirror never fails to find its image even being virtual depth of silence slowly precipitates over rune of shadow yet know time and space even differs by creed of variety knowingly unknown riffles resolute from crowd within yes sir, mirror never fails you to recognise what you are and what is real inside you.... beautiful write with meanigful mesage..10 read mine mirror.... a place called home... all dreams not come true
Rain Reels Through..........The title well imaginative Dr. kar. The interplay of love in the reference to rain you have crafted is a vista that has been deified in the poem with so much tender words. The symbolic usage of the imagery is well lit with emotions and that defines your purity of heart and love for scenics......10/10
wonderful simile: ''verdant green and blue dusts all when similar as sizzles of rain reels through the dusty summer'' of this poem belonging to symbolism. The rain and dust, by reflection can generate another space which seems to belong to shadows, projected somewhere in the blue sky, but no, there are only the poet's eyes, which are looking inwards.wonderful poem..10+++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Another connection problem within this site perhaps to have a multiple submission of theme.........you have crafted a magnanimous poetry written in fabulous imagery...............10++++++++