Rain! Rain! Where Are You? Poem by Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Rain! Rain! Where Are You?

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Scornful sun playing havoc, infuriatingly
With humans of every class, mercilessly
Display a walking skeletons and straw thatches
On soil, once were the blooming crops

Gasping tongues, looking for a drop
So precious and life saving, for all beings
Looking up and praying heart and soul
Every where, through to the skyline

Warm-hearted city folk's sacrifice
Would meet just a meager morsel
Yet a consolation, even for a moment
To the genuine giver and receiver alike

Let the divine powers, up in heaven
Sense what these blameless faced in common
Evil befallen, casting lives barren ‘n sullen
Men, women, old, young, all in one warren

Let drying throats be moistened once even
And keep hopes mounting while they hang on
As white patches grow, masking blue's morose
Lives therein would pray for long awaited rain

Rain! Rain! Where Are You?
Thursday, November 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: sacrifice
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Key rice production area in Sri Lanka had been affected quite seriously by a prolonged drought. Every form of life was hit hard unprecedented way. Rest of the country, joining the government, made sacrifices in whatever the way each one could, towards consoling affected. Poem is in felicitation to one such attempt, while depicting the true picture in-situ.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 13 September 2017

Gasping tongues were looking for a drop and on soil, once were the blooming crops. Where did you go oh rain? Let the Divine power fall on men, women, old, young, all in one warren. Rain of mercy enlightens life and rain of cloud brings green scene in Earth. Amazing and brilliant poem is shared here.10

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Bri Edwards 28 November 2014

you have made your point well, that water, often wasted when it is plentiful, is a cherished gift when in short supply. we, in california, u.s.a., have experienced what has been called a three-year drought, but people, including my wife still waste water, though my wife has made some concessions. unfortunately, she feels it is a lie that there really is a drought to be concerned about. some of the water in this state is piped hundreds of miles to other parts of the state to major population centers, but perhaps those vast sources of water can not be counted on for long. this is one reason i will not be sad when i die.....not sad about my death.....as i believe fewer people-who-need- water is a large part of any solution. global-warming, caused by man or by nature may well bring many to their knees. thanks for sharing. my favorite lines of the poem: Scornful sun playing havoc, infuriatingly With humans of every class, mercilessly ............................. : ( bri :) p.s. the photo you posted drew me to you.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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