Rain In The Deep Poem by Ovison Nita

Rain In The Deep

Rating: 4.3


I feel a strange wind blowing with a sharp edge, calling and beckoning on thunder, i couldn't get a glimpse, until i was gripped, fire in my veins, higher than my rage, hot ice visits in an impromptu style, a harder tour embarks, falling waters envelope the depths, planely submits to deadlier storm i succumb, as flashes of cold fire and hot rain meet my face.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
when the rain falls down with all her strength.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ovison Enita 11 July 2013

Yea indeed the sky falls!

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Dave Walker 10 July 2013

A fine poem, the sky opens and the rain falls.

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Dinesan Madathil 10 July 2013

A good poem celebrating the festivity of rain written in precise format..

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