Rain By The Sea Poem by Jay P Narain

Rain By The Sea



I have seen downpour over the rooftops and trees,
I have seen rain over the mountains and valleys,
Even it rains over the vast ocean,
I guess it rains all over the world.

The rain, thunderstorm and lightning,
Put all the cruising boats and yachts at the bay,
the exalting sailing spirits were dampened,
The colorful sails of sailboats were all wet and disheartened.

Looking at the downpour from a sheltered cove.
Arms in arms, the lovers held hands with deep passion,
The thunder and lightning brought their bodies close together,
The rains brought the close feeling of sticking together.

The duck, ducklings, and the birds happily jumped in the ocean,
Only to enjoy the rain by themselves,
The sight of heavy rain over the vast ocean,
Filled our heart with the tranquility of the music of rain over the sea.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pandian Angelina 16 June 2009

The rain and the ocean are both romantic elements in their own right and a combination of them both together definetly adds to the tempo, the colorful sail boats make a contrasting picture with the otherwise wet weather. But, I've never seen ducks and birds jumping in the ocean rain or not! A wonderful poem potraying the various aspects frame by frame gradually developing the closeness between the lovers! A wonderful short video picture, with beautiful panning effects! Angel

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