Rain Breeze Poem by Neelam Dadhwal

Rain Breeze

Rating: 4.5


rain breeze...
a spider climbs out
of its web

Friday, June 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Oh, snap! This is reminiscent of the very first poem I ever wrote. But where my was dreary, this is vibrant and bright. I like it, for what it is. It almost makes we smell the rain.

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