Rain Poem by Jinal Oswal

Rain

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I walk straight to this world,
Staring back as they watch me blank
My eyes searching for a soothing sight
Feels like I will lose my sight tonight

So many people yet no one mine
Everyone is around me but where is my wind chime
I tumble down and everyone shares a laugh
No one helps me stand up

I stand and stare back at the blue sky
The sky is clear but my thoughts are not
The city is struck with drought but my eyes are still rainy




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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 14 April 2012

They say, when you fall, dönt get up and look at the place you fell, rather look at the place where you stumbled and see what tripped you....and sister, never be scared of shadows, they simply mean there's light nearby...so dry those tears..

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Unwritten Soul 29 March 2012

Rainy eyes...and in the middle of your both, your will see a seven lines of hopes, seven lines of colors..a rainbow...it doesnt matter how hard, if it really matter for this hard but someday after the rain comes the rainbow after you hurt must be a happy wait inside...there's no way to worry because everyone will know what is glory and you will know once time bring you there, so never feel down..one day you are at the top of glory with smile and happiness..and come the second time rainbow after your eyes making rain again...this time a tear of happiness, be strong Jinal! _Unwritten Soul

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Wahab Abdul 28 March 2012

nice poem...the poem ends with sadistic note with the metaphor ''rain'' please read some of my poem.

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