Rain Poem by james ivan almalvez

Rain

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The tears of the sky
Fall down quickly yet lightly
On the rusty roof

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Virginia Pecho Gely 29 December 2011

Your pen is a quick as the images of this short poem. It is not the number of lines that counts in a poem, but the ideas, themes and thoughts that are shared with each lines. Thanks for sharing and keep up your write.

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Ency Bearis 15 November 2011

Great Haiku, well penned.

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