Rain Poem by Catrina Heart

Rain

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how lovely the rain,
pouring out love
in every field

how lovely the rain
if it pour just right
to each craving ground

quenching the terrain's thirst
supplying man's requirements

none flood to drain
none calamity to mule over

as rain sustains
just right, just right to our needs and gains......


Inspired by: samanyan lakshminarayanan's poem Rain

10th of November,2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 09 November 2009

Another well written piece......

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Brishti Mazumdar 09 November 2009

Catrina, I like your natural free flowing way of writing.....

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Priyanka Bhowmick 09 November 2009

wonderful flow of words..n u hav described the whole thing in short in such a complete way... always nice to go thru ur compositions....

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Fay Slimm 10 November 2009

Good to see a tribute to rain Catrina - - and well thought through it was a pleasure to read..... thak you Fay

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rago rago 10 November 2009

rain we welcome and to run jump and laugh while pouring it was the joyous moods and moments.................

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Noel Horlanda 23 November 2009

excellent, you made it just in time. As you said, just the right amount of rain, no more, . no less. We experienced a devastating flood lately because of torrential rain. But the kids would say, rain, rain, go away...come again another day...cause I want to play...All right! ! ! .

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Vijay Gupta 22 November 2009

Written in a lucid manner. Fine poem.

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You And Me 21 November 2009

fine write............................

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Rafique Farooqi 15 November 2009

rain is greening to soils and even deserts it quenches the thirsty, THE RAIN OF LOVE IS VITAL to souls.............well done

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 November 2009

how lovely the rain, pouring out love in every field...............................how much relief rain brings to our life...; it is beautifully crafted poem...love issimply pouring like poemandoneshouldbe proudof receiving such rain in life.......10 read mine..rain delay.. rain has come.. merci o, rain god... watched helplessly

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