Rain Poem by Bri Lynne

Rain



The rain pulls at my insides
Pulls the salt from my eyes
Reminding me of the gloom
Hiding just beyond the sunny skies

The smell envelopes me
Memories of years I've spent
Staring out into the falling drops
When I loved simple things
Like dancing barefoot in the rain

Thunder shaking my core
With each mournful drum
Like a beached whale
Moaning as its last breath gets eaten up
With the wild winds

The rain changes me
With each melodic drop
Making me weak
Much too hopelessly realized

Much too quick to weep

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 08 January 2010

Rain and pain....interesting depiction...nice poem

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Beena J 08 January 2010

very sad poem good expressions about how the rain reminds the days of past... the good old happy carefree days

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Prashant Shaurya 08 January 2010

a poem riveted with pain.. very well written with some beautiful expressions.. well done.. regards prashant

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