Rain Poem by Seema Aarella

Rain

Rating: 3.4


Only a cynic can dismiss
This phenomenon as a
Rather mundane affair,
The ongoing alchemy of love,
In the lawns of sky.

When an infatuated cloud
Liquefied in the courteous tempo
Of his fiery romance
During a seductive season of rain,

While I nestled under a kiosk
A fascinated angel
Descended upon the rainbow
And forgot to return to paradise!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 31 October 2008

GOD sends angels as helpers in life

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Sathyanarayana M V S 12 November 2008

Truly poetic......great imagery.......10+++++

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premji premji 12 November 2008

sweat of sun pours down monsoon... ha..ha.ha

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Aijaz Asif 05 November 2008

When an infatuated cloud Liquefied in the courteous tempo Of his fiery romance During a seductive season of rain, ...beautiful very beautiful...you know how to take readers with you to beautiful imaginery world....it surely is a superb write, thanks 10++++

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Sathyanarayana M V S 31 October 2008

This is a great imagery lu captured so beautifully. But I feel u could have used some other word instead of 'critic'; like 'skeptic'. Think over...10

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Dr Kamran Haider 31 October 2008

You know the art of giving fine words to your beautiful thoughts and emotions... A beautfiful poem indeed... Regards, Kamran

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