R! Se Up Poem by tanvi damle

R! Se Up

Rating: 3.5


You lost your loved ones in the sand and rubble,
and you struggle to accept it,
the pain almost unbearable.
I won't lie and say i understand,
but I will be there with you holding your hand.
We will pray together,
we will fight this together,
I will do whatever I can to make it a little better.
When you can't seem to sleep at night,
I'll be there giving you hope,
holding your hand tight.
Hold on, we shall make it through,
be strong, I'm right here with you.
I'll do whatever it takes
to bring the lost smile back on your face,
don't give up, things will fall into place.
We won't give up,
we shall get back on our feet.
I'll be there with you
every second, every minute.
We shall take it one day at a time
the pain will be gone
and soon shall the sun shine.

-Dedicated to all the people of Haiti

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Merna Ibrahim 23 January 2010

Outstanding poem, your support has been sent in a good way....These people are really desperate and they need support from all the coutries..that earthquake was unbearble but unfortunately we cannot stop the natural phenomenons, only God'Almighty'so, God help them! ...Good Work :)

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Pradyumna Jyotir 23 January 2010

The poem is not just about empty sympathy....it is also about empathy and above all very sensitively penned...keep writing.

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7he N0153 4nd 7he Fur9 23 January 2010

We will pray together, we will fight this together, I will do whatever I can to make it a little better. When you can't seem to sleep at night, I'll be there giving you hope, holding your hand tight Tanvi you are a true soul, and this poem is a definite work of deep emphatic genius.

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Leah Ayliffe 23 January 2010

Breathtaking, truly wonderful. I donated to Haiti last night, I think its beautiful how in such a disaterous world people can still come together to restore the hope and faith in humanity. Inspirational write!

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Darlene Styles 23 January 2010

love it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! very inspirational..

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Such a beautiful poem, well pondered. thank you for that honest point of view 10\! ! !

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 13 March 2010

awesome poem, very soothing and honest. 'I won't lie and say i understand, but I will be there with you holding your hand.' wonderful friend, this line is very sincere and mature. i just loved the poem. thank you so much.

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Tom Golding 13 February 2010

A heartfelt sense of wishing to do more comes through which I share. Thank you for including me.

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Chitra - 27 January 2010

Heart felt feelings for the victims. A hope-driven write, igniting the spirit of courage within us all...

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Noel Horlanda 27 January 2010

'we shall get back on our feet'. This is a positive thought meaning don't just die, get back on your feet and fight back. I have also countrymen who perished in the tragedy - four UN Peace Keepers and two overseas workers who worked in a supermarket. I'm sure they were good men and women. I considered them as heroes. I prayed for their souls together with the poor and impoverish Haitians earthquake victims. Prayers are all that I can afford. This is a lovely dedication to all Haitian people. Thanks for sharing.

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